Sunday, July 7, 2013

Fields of Elysium is the Indie Book of the Week by My Guilty Obsession

The best kind of reviews when the reader expects less and gets more.:)

"Fields of Elysium is one of those books that completely takes you by surprise with how involved and wrapped up in it you become. I never expected to love this as much as I did nor to become so engrossed in the story that I would have to sit down and read it all in one sitting simply because I had to know how it all played out." My Guilty Obsession REVIEW+GIVEAWAY





Thursday, June 27, 2013

World War Z - My Movie Review


World War Z


2013PG-13
A U.N. employee races against time and fate as he travels the world trying to stop the spread of a deadly zombie pandemic. As the undead hordes gain strength across the globe, governments topple and Earth stands on the brink of total social collapse.








My Review:


If you haven’t gone to see the movie World War Z yet, hesitate no longer. This summer blockbuster has everything a good movie needs: plenty of action that keeps your eyes glued to the screen; emotional scenes that make you root for the characters; believable acting along with a plot that actually makes sense.
The movie is rated PG-13, but in my opinion, too much suspense and too many scary parts make it unsuitable for younger kids. As a fiction writer and avid movie fan, I saw most of the scary scenes coming and warned my kids to cover their eyes, but two teen boys next to me jumped from fright quite a few times.
Some claim that Brad Pitt has lost his charm, but I don’t feel that way. I loved him in this role, playing a caring father and experienced UN field scientist. Actually, I can’t remember any other disaster movie where the leading scientist cared more about his/her family than the survival of mankind itself. When an epidemic breaks out, infecting everybody who gets bitten by zombies with a fast spreading virus, the Brad Pitt character’s number-one priority is getting his family to safety instead of satisfying his own curiosity by finding the cure. Yet when government officials corner him and force him to face the facts that only those people are going to be saved who serve a purpose, he steps up to lead the investigation into the origin of the breakout and, with that, ensure his own family’s survival.

The investigation takes the audience from the USA to North Korea to Israel. We meet interesting characters, and learn bits and pieces about the virus, all parts of a puzzle that won’t be solved by the end of the movie, leaving open the opportunity for a sequel or sequels. This story has the potential to grow and branch out.  If the studio comes out with the next installment, I’ll definitely go to see what happens next.  

Thursday, June 20, 2013

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Wednesday, June 5, 2013

What is an author platform and how can you get one?



If you are a new author, getting ready to publish or one who has been published already, and you don’t understand why your book doesn’t sell, you probably haven’t heard about author platforms, as was the case with me when I published my first book.

Since there are dozens of articles and posts explaining the definition of author platforms, I’ve decided to share the personal experiences of my publishing journey with you instead. Hopefully you can learn from my mistakes and launch a very successful writing career.

It was in 2011 when I finished my first novel American Charm.  I was so excited about it that I couldn’t wait to see it in print. While my test readers (only family members back then) read it and criticized it, I researched literary agents and my publishing options. I considered the story to be perfect because it came from my heart, and I believed as such it deserved to be on the shelves of bookstores. I decided to find an agent who would represent me at the major publishing houses. I bought guidebooks, did more research online, and finally ended up sending query letters to two prestigious agents in the business. Very soon I had to face the reality that instead of agents fighting each other to get hold of my manuscript, one of them rejected me politely, the other never responded. My pride suffered, but not my enthusiasm.

Next, I did more research and found out about Amazon KDP and Createspace self-publishing. Eager to hold and smell my first freshly printed book, I submitted my novel to an online editing company, paying them big bucks to bring the manuscript into shape, only to find out a year later that they did a sloppy job. I designed the cover, wrote a synopsis, and finally uploaded my book to Amazon but priced it way too high. I didn’t want to be compared to other self-published authors. I thought myself better. Stupid of me. Then I shared the link with my three hundred friends on Facebook, believing that they would promote it for me and the news about my newly published book would spread like wildfire. Oh boy, how wrong I was!

While I wanted the world to stop and for everybody to concentrate on my super-duper amazing story, and download, review and share it, I received a monthly report with only a dozen sales.  My husband encouraged me, saying that, considering that I’m Hungarian and English is my second language, the fact that I convinced a dozen people my book was worth their money is pretty incredible. But I wanted more. I just didn’t know how to get it. Soon I became torn between spending my limited time working on a sequel or promoting myself. I started to read articles about successful self-pub authors with great envy, hoping to learn a trick or two, but whatever I tried only boosted sales momentarily.

But I kept going. I reached out to local papers and review companies, and created a little buzz once more. The book started to sell, then the sales died down again. Finally I gave up on self-promotion and concentrated on writing, believing that either my story or my writing style was not good enough. I wanted to get better. 

Four months later I published a short novella, and by early next year the second volume of American Charm. I knew I was not going to break the bank with the new releases, but I believed I had to continue the story for those who enjoyed my first book.

However, as time went by I never stopped collecting information about self-publishing successes, so by the time I finished my fourth book, Fields of Elysium, I had a well-detailed marketing plan. Due to the fact that Fields of Elysium is a young-adult romantic fantasy, a different genre from my first series, I decided to change my author name and start afresh. I even un-published my previous novels because they are nowhere near to my new standards, but I’m planning to revise them.
Fields of Elysium was completed, proofread, and edited by a retired English professor, test-read, designed and had a cover and synopsis. I only had to start building my author platform, bring awareness to my book, and create a demand for it. I opened an account on Goodreads and started a two-month-long ARC book giveaway. By the time the novel was published, close to a thousand people marked it ‘to-read.’

I submitted it to professional review companies, like Kirkus Reviews, Readers Favorite, Reader Views Kids, Young Adult and Teen Readers, etc. to gain creditability through their respected opinions. Then I started to send queries to book bloggers and book clubs, humbly asking them to accept a free hardcopy of my book in exchange for an honest review. When I ran out of books (you have to watch your budget), I offered free e-books. Truth be told, hardcopies were more popular than e-books.

In the meantime, I bugged the life out of my already existing Facebook friends and fans with news of my upcoming hot release. Surprisingly I received positive feedback. The number of my fans started to increase, so I began to post giveaways, funny posts, romantic posts, etc., aware that I’m not really good at connecting with fans through social media sites.

With the growing awareness about my book on Goodreads and Facebook, I started to receive five-star reviews from professionals.

The big day came. Fields of Elysium was published. Knowing my former sales numbers, I was very pleased to see the first monthly report. But my job was not nearly done. I reached out to other authors in the same genre; we did author exchange reviews, along with promoting each other’s work and exchanging information.

I’m still new to the business and I learn something everyday, such as how effective book blast and blog tours can be; how important it is to join forces with similar authors and do joint promotions; and even how to price your book right.

I have learned over the past two years that building your author platform takes time and it’s necessary for traditionally published and indie authors equally. Visibility and proven reach (number of fans, comments on your posts, reviews, target-audience posts and interactions, etc.) are what agents and readers look at first before they invest in you. You have to be open to new approaches, reach out and help fellow authors, open Facebook, Twitter, Google+ accounts, set up a Goodreads page to increase your book’s visibility. Create a trailer, join book clubs as a reader not a writer, reach out to bloggers, reading communities, and above all never give up.

I still have a lot to learn, but I never stop browsing the web for new ideas. After every book I published I learned something new, and I do better with each book launch. Today I know that it’s not enough to start building awareness of your book two months in advance, because receiving reviews and organizing book blasts and blog tours take months.

I hope you will learn from my mistakes, and will be patient and won’t rush into publishing your book. If you plan to write a series, I highly recommend finishing the second and third books before you publish the first one. You will still have time to polish them, or rewrite parts between publications, but that’s still less work than trying to write an entire novel in a timely fashion while you spend six-teen hours a day on the computer to promote your first book.

And I leave the most important thing for last. It doesn’t matter how much money or how many hours you spend on building your author platform if your book doesn’t talk to the readers. All successful authors – fiction or non-fiction – have one thing in common: they were all able to strike an emotional chord in the readers; and their books were most likely well edited and proofread as well. It’s not an easy thing to do; otherwise every book would be a bestseller.

Wednesday, May 22, 2013

Why It's So Difficult to Sell a Self-published Book?



By A.B.Whelan

The answer is very simple: because it’s not popular. People tend to buy or even interact with products that are already popular. Of course there are other elements, such as being poorly written and edited, dotted with typos, meaningless plots, paper-thin characters, etc., however, if a book is popular people will buy it in spite of its flaws. 

Established publishing houses have entire teams of editors, designers, PR personnel, publicists, and a ton of money to make any book look desirable. They have working formulas that have been perfected over the years and tested on the market for decades. On the other hand, if you are a self-published author, you’re most likely a one-man team who write, edit, design, and promote your own work. The good news is that in today's technological revolution there are tons of easily accessible author-platform-building tools available for those who are willing to learn and listen.

What makes a book popular?

Trademark. When Harper Teens publishes a novel, you can be sure it’s a great book. And we believe it is a great book because we trust their editors’ taste and have already sampled their products. Now that's the trademark an upcoming self-pub author doesn't have. We have to gain the reader’s trust. And it’s not easy because readers know if an author publishes her own work, the book hasn’t gone through any kind of filter and most likely the final product is not as good as a well-edited, thoroughly proofread book which professionals worked on for months. Oh, we do try to get our books edited, but no matter how your sister, husband, friend, mother, etc. say that your book is the best book she has ever read, in reality people close to us will never tell you the complete truth.

What can you do to get your manuscript into a better state?

Hire a professional editor. Which is easier said than done, because just for a simple spelling check you have to cough up a thousand bucks. A thorough proofreading, editing and critical appraisal can cost you up to five grand. And your book might never sell more than a couple hundred copies for $2.99. I was lucky to meet a fantastic English professor who is willing to edit my work for the pure fun of it. But one proofreader is not enough. I know self-pub authors who hired multiple proofreaders and they still find phrases or words that should have been changed or parts that do nothing but drag out the story.

So if self-pub authors’ books are not quality enough, why do readers care about them at all?

Because they are cheap or even free, the risk is minimal, yet there is a chance of finding a gem.  Besides, Amazon even allows its customers to return e-books for seven days after purchase. And from time-to-time self-pub authors do emerge from the sea of e-book publishers. Amanda Hockings’ books are very popular despite reviewers’ complaints about the lack of editing. I guess her stories were satisfying enough. And without reader support authors such as Colleen Hoover, Jennifer L. Armentrout, Jessica Sorensen might never have been discovered either.

Most of us self-pub authors want to produce the best books with the limited tools we can afford. We try to get better, work harder, re-read our manuscript one more time. And after a few successful book launches we can afford to spend more money on polishing our new manuscripts. We always chase time because we don’t have the luxury of writing our books for a year. Readers demand sequels, new novels, otherwise they forget about us and move on to a new series. Some of us try to keep the attention on us with silly Facebook posts and images, or share bits of our life on Twitter, hoping that those readers who liked our first book will stay interested and buy the next one. And unfortunately in the rush to publish (sometimes every 2-3 months), quantity defeats quality.

But if you set the bar high for yourself and you dare to dream big, eventually you will achieve great things. Your book might never be the next Twilight or Hunger Games, but it could always be the first Fields of Elysium. :o)

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Saturday, May 18, 2013

Fields of Elysium Book Extra: Deleted Prologue


This never-before-published prologue was originally part of Fields of Elysium, and was removed from the final version during the editing process.
The conversation between Molly and Camilla foreshadows important details of the upcoming sequel Valley of Darkness


Prologue



Once the wormhole spouts me out, I land on my knees. My journeys through the Secret Passage used to be much smoother, enjoyable even, but this time every cell of my body aches. Well, I’m not sixteen anymore, I groan, and heave myself to my feet, holding on to the cave’s cold wall. I look back at the swirling blue light to note the gradual calming of the ring-shaped swellings. Seconds later only a few waves ripple across the surface and at last it smooths out. If I were to describe the circular phenomenon blocking the way in a few words, I’d say it looked as if a mirror-smooth lake had flipped vertically in front of me, creating confusion as to what was up and what was down.
The image doesn’t shock me, though. Not anymore.
I turn toward the darkness to find my way out of the cavern. My eyes take a moment to get used to the dim light as I slowly begin stumbling along the rocky path.
It was a sudden decision to return to Earth, and now here in the dark I realize how unprepared I am for this visit. I desperately need some light, which I don’t have. However, the creepiness of this place doesn’t faze me. I’m well aware of the infiltrated light I’m about to reach. So I just keep going, inhaling the dusty air, low on oxygen.
Just one more step, I keep encouraging myself.
When I finally reach the spot where the mouth of the cave is supposed to be, it’s still pitch black around me. A worm of suspicion starts to bore inside me. Is it possible that I had calculated the time incorrectly and arrived to Earth at night?  I had done this so many times before; I even had a special device to do the work for me. I couldn’t be wrong.
Determined to get out of this place, I take the next few yards with my arms stretched out in front of me. I search for the entrance like a blind man. Soon my fingers touch something soft, a living thing. A plant perhaps? With my eyes still useless in the dark, I can feel my fingers wrapping around a vine and I tear on it, allowing the sunbeams to penetrate the vegetation. And after more intense tearing and pushing, I breach the overgrown cluster of desert bushes and shrubs in front of the entrance.
At last I’m out of the cave.
Standing in the clearing, I draw a long and deep breath of the summer California air.
I’m finally home.
Oh, how much I missed this place!
My watch beeps madly and I squint at it. The settings have already changed to Earth’s date and time, and I let out a sigh of relief. My calculations are precise and I still have plenty of time to hike up on the bluff and get to Griffith Observatory, where I planned to call for a taxi.
Despite my active lifestyle since I passed fifty, my endurance isn’t what it used to be. From climbing on the steep side of the hill, I pant heavily and lean against the railing by the Observatory, trying to slow down my heartbeats.
When the burning in my thighs dissolves and my lungs don’t hurt as much, I steal one more glance at Los Angeles beneath me and head to the main building of the Observatory to find a public phone.
The taxi ride is short, yet I regain my strength, which I very much needed. I’m going to spend my entire afternoon telling my extraordinary story to a bestselling author, Camilla Baker. In high school, she was one of my best friends. Today, more than likely, she is going to greet me as a stranger.
So many things had changed since my family moved to the West Coast, but I had decades to digest the past, so I’m calm when I step out of the cab.
“Hi, Camilla!” I greet the young woman sitting on the bench under a giant palm tree. There is an undisguised joy in my voice from seeing her again, even when I suspect that she is not going to recognize me. Out of an old habit, a very old habit, I wrap my arms around her body, rigid with astonishment. She smells just as good as I had remembered.
When I pull back, Camilla gazes at me, wide-eyed. My intimate greeting must have left her confused.
“It’s me. Molly. Molly Bennett,” I say, my body tingling with excitement, as I sit down beside her.
The notebook falls out of her hand and lands on the concrete sidewalk with a thud. As she picks it up, her narrowed eyes scan me from my toes to my head.
“You called me about a story, right?” she asks. I can detect a faint recognition developing in her eyes, though her mind is obviously fighting to reject the idea.
“Yes, I did,” I confirm, trying hard to sound formal. It can’t be managed without difficulty because the anticipation of spending time with Camilla after so many years wants to burst out of me. “When I learned about your successful career as an author I was so proud. So once I decided to tell my story to someone, there was no question whom to ask.”
“Do we know each other? Have we met at a book signing or a book fair somewhere?” Camilla’s face flushes with a mixture of suspicion and discomfort. I have to choose my words carefully now. I don’t want her to get up and run, thinking that I was an escapee from an asylum.
“We went to high school together,” I say slowly, allowing the words to sink in. “The girl from Hopewell?” I remind her, pointing to myself.
“That’s impossible,” she bursts out, shock creeping into her voice. She leans back on the bench, her body as tense as ever. “I don’t mean to be disrespectful, but the Molly I went to school with would be twenty-five now. While you … you look …”
“I’m fifty-eight. I know this doesn’t make any sense to you right now but once I’ve finished telling you what happened to me it will all make sense.” I smile, in an effort to radiate calmness.
Being back on Earth is making me very emotional. It had been forty years Arkana time since I last breathed the air here. And soon the passage is going to be destroyed, gone forever. I only have a few days to make sure that my name wouldn’t disappear and the memories of my life fade away without a trace.
The blood drains from Camilla’s face as she looks over her shoulder. She seems to be expecting a camera crew from a prank TV show jumping out from behind the bushes. But there is nothing or nobody around us; only the warm summer breeze, birds chirping, and random passing cars.
Choosing our old school’s front lawn as a meeting place is both good and bad.
Good because just by looking at the ivory-colored Beverly Hills High School building the flashbacks starts. And bad because the memories wrench my heart.
 When Camilla looks at me again, her eyes are more focused. She must have started to notice the resemblance between my younger face and the one I have today.
“It is you!” she whispers after seconds of an awkward silence, tears gathering in her eyes. “Where have you been? What happened to you?”
My vision becomes misty as I hug her again. This time Camilla returns my hug with the passion of an old friend.
“That’s why I’m here today … to tell you everything. Every little detail.” I speak softly into her ear and straighten back up. “Did you bring your recorder?”
She lifts the device to show me, wiping away the tears that glistened on her cheeks. “Why didn’t you call? I’ve been waiting for you to contact me for years.”
“I never moved to the North. I lied to you. I lied to everybody. Once my parents died something broke in me. It was excruciatingly painful. No seventeen-year-old body should experience what I was forced to live through emotionally. I’m sure you remember when my aunt came down after the accident to look after Nick and me. But I just couldn’t stand staying with her. I chose a different path which determined my entire life.”
“Thank you for calling me, Molly. I don’t even know what to say. I can’t wait to hear the entire story. What made you age so fast?”
Having a techie as a friend on Arkana had been very useful to me. I could never have figured out how to get in touch with Camilla from across the universe on my own.
“It’s so awesome that you are a published novelist. It’s so cool.” I smile again, fighting the lump in my throat. I used to think that my tear ducts had dried up years ago, but apparently I thought wrong.
I close my eyes for a moment and sigh. I concentrate on the day when this amazing journey began. The picture is so clear in my mind, as if it had all happened yesterday.
I hear the beep of the voice recorder.
I take a deep breath, look up at the school, and start my story.



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